Joint effort of otz writers

If anyone is interested…chimera gave me an idea. would anyone be interested in a joint effort poem…everyone adds a little bit to it…a few lines…

everyone here has such a unique writing style i was curious to see what would come of it.

*I wanted to add one more note to this…another idea for it…once this one dies out…hasnt been added to for a bit…how bout someone jump in and start a new one…lets see if we can keep it going…all otz people welcome to join in not just those who usually post in here :slight_smile: *

The only thing that pops into my head for starters is

[B]~If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind~

[/B]anyone interested in seeing where this goes pick it up from there…add what you want what you think sounds good in your own style…

I could update this thread as the poem grows

~If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind~
stop the clock as on a dime
returning all the pain I find

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history’s mysteries

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history’s mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.

*I wanted to add one more note to this…another idea for it…once this one dies out…hasnt been added to for a bit…how bout someone jump in and start a new one…lets see if we can keep it going…all otz people welcome to join in not just those who usually post in here :slight_smile: *

so far we have for this poem…

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history’s mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.

[quote=“Kat, post: 292569”]*I wanted to add one more note to this…another idea for it…once this one dies out…hasnt been added to for a bit…how bout someone jump in and start a new one…lets see if we can keep it going…all otz people welcome to join in not just those who usually post in here :slight_smile: *

so far we have for this poem…

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history’s mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.[/quote]
the firey heart of only one,
deciding whats beginning or done,

ok so I guess this ends the first one…anyone want to have a go at starting the next? :slight_smile:

note if you want to continue on the first no problem it was just a thought

twas the night before christmas… :smiley:
JK :slight_smile:

Hows about

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.

If I could turn back time,
hit a button; press rewind
stop the clock as on a dime,
returning all the pain I find
I would save the best for me,
just a piece of misery.

free from whats restricting me
I unfurl my history’s mysteries
And I find an inner soul,
but one I can not control.
My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.
Through clenched teeth
With white knuckled fists
I swallow the pain
and the hollowness that exists

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.
Alone in thoughts of loss I sit
Knowing one more day wont fade my torment

(adding to boomer)

which is what i have done all through the years
secretly trapping all my hatred and fear
forgotten it lays there-and there it remains
knowing one day i’ll give in to the pain

I’m lost now. Which to follow…

Whichever one you choose. one or both… wherever your words take you

find a way to blend them if you prefer. Its totally on you.

My heart bleeds for her/him,
like an open wound.
Trying desperatly to heal the pain,
unravel the damage done.
Alone in thoughts of loss I sit
Knowing one more day wont fade my torment
which is what i have done all through the years
secretly trapping all my hatred and fear
forgotten it lays there-and there it remains
knowing one day i’ll give in to the pain
And now, when my heart bleeds it no longer stings
For I have no gone onto the better side of things.

I think of the memories of yesterday
For I will weep for them as i sit and pray

I think of the memories of yesterday
For I will weep for them as i sit and pray
Moments now gone that are stuck in my mind,
With this prayer I ask for them to rewind.

WOW… I just have to intervine here guys and tell ya…

Yall are coming up with some amazing thoughts and words…

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