Something i just threw together


#1

Bring me Down

I called the other day
You once told me to
As the phone rang away
I can’t get a hold of you

I don’t know why it is
You always bring me down
That shit gets me pissed
You always bring me down

You’re so happy to be
All on your own again
When you talked to me
I’m left alone in pain

I am not the same
I hate being artificial
But you keep playing games
You seem too superficial

I don’t know why it is
You always bring me down
That shit gets me pissed
You always bring me down

When you told me something
I felt my heart sink
I was reduced to nothing
This brought me to the brink

I say that I’m done
But I keep thinking
You want to have fun
I’m left alone sinking

I don’t know why it is
You always bring me down
That shit gets me pissed
You always bring me down

[size=1]© 2005 jao[/size]

Critique, flame… dunt care.


#2

i didnt read it, but hey jao :dunno


#3

what a loser, who the hell writes this shit :gay

im jk man, is it about your ex, or some old friend?


#4

nice, could use some music, but nice :booze


#5

I’ll let you all in on a little secret. I’ve never had an ex. I didn’t get into dating in high school, and for the first few years after high school I worked too much to have anything of a social life. 2005 was the first year I’ve been out to clubs, been to concerts and actually went out after work/on the weekends.

This is about someone I used to work with.


#6

Re: RE: Something i just threw together.

[quote=2000Si]I’ll let you all in on a little secret. I’ve never had an ex. I didn’t get into dating in high school, and for the first few years after high school I worked too much to have anything of a social life. 2005 was the first year I’ve been out to clubs, been to concerts and actually went out after work/on the weekends.

This is about someone I used to work with.[/quote]

Ic, fair enough. I’ve never played the dating game either. I mean i had little things here and there in middle school and freshman year of highschool, but i’ve been with my present girlfriend since soph. year of hs.


#7

That’s awesome. I never could see how that can come to be. I mean yeah I’ve had prospects and whatnot, but I’ve never jumped at them because I didn’t know how. I have a few friends who always seem to have a girlfriend at one point in time. I have one good friend who dated a girl in middle school, they broke up and he dated another chic all through high school. Senior year he finds out she cheated on him twice so they break up and suddenly he’s back with the girl from his middle school days. They’re married now… I just don’t know how the fuck this stuff happens.


#8

yeah, its pretty crazy. Ever since we met in 5th grade we ‘dated’, you know those middle school relationships. We were always friends and off and on in middle school. Then we ended up having a gym class together in HS that really brought us closer. So i finally worked up the corage to ask her out, and we’ve been together ever since. Im 100% confident that she is the one I will be married to. Maybe this summer, but probably next.


#9

yeah if you’re still together all this time (even on and off) most definitely man. I’ll expect my wedding invitation in the mail. :smiley:

Seriously… I’ve been wanting to head back to Columbus, been there twice and thought it was great… even though the downtown streets are kinda odd.

Anyway… yeah… if you all remember all my concerts I’ve been to… it’s that girl. BDN will know EXACTLY who this is about.


#10

nice stuff, but she should be bringing you up. btw, asking girls out isnt a big deal. there is a ton of girls, hell millions, and if one or 20 say no, move on with your head high. confidence is useful to some degree, as long as it doesnt turn into cockiness…

i think your poem is cool james


#11

Thanks. I never got a chance to ask her out. She came right out with “Yeah… I went back with him…” just as I felt I could ask… so now I haven’t talked to her for a month. Been wantin to call her though.


#12

what happen to that girl that used to alway flash you. the one who had her nipples pierced. dint you like her too.


#13

Re: RE: Something i just threw together.

Oh Amber. After east of chicago closed the store I haven’t seen her since. kinda fucked up. she had some nice tits. with piercings… damn and I had forgotten about that until just now for some reason. lol